Hey there,
I made a game called destructed lands.

Its about a circle, that needs to save the world from electric power.
Travel trough the fire and electric world to find the source.
You need to draw your way to the end.

Graphics:
the graphics are made by me.
The style is cartoony shaded.

Gameplay:
the gameplay is nice and original. Because you use your mouse
and draw your ways to the end of the level.
Also you need to draw to beat a boss.
Read the signs when playing. They gif many tips... Sometimes..

Sound:
Sorry no sounds...

Screens:



Download:
Mediafire
Yoyogames

Information:
- Made with gm6
- 128 kb

When you play the game.
Please rate,
do it like:

Gameplay: -/10
Graphics: -/10
Total: -/10

This is a game that I made in 1 day.
It is pretty nice.
But I can do lot better.
Please play it

I could make a tutorial from how I made the drawing later...

Kyon.

Gameplay : 9/10
The game is very original and fun. However, the player can get stuck in the lines he draws, which can be annoying. Also, you could have made larger and more challenging levels.

Graphics : 7/10
Well, the graphics could have been a little bit better...

Overall : 8/10

Thanks lukas.
About the stucking in the drawing itself:
When you read all the signs, you see it says:
when you draw a line above you or inside you, you get a jump boost

also you can just remove lines when you are stuck...
Have you beaten the whole game??

Thanks for playing,


Kyon.

Right, it was my mistake. I haven't been reading the signs. I just played quickly because I had other things to do.
And no, I haven't beaten the whole game yet.

I beat the game. The prize at the end is really boring, xD. I loved the game and I hope you make a part 2.
(Oh and can you make a tutorial for drawing lines AND make sure you can make it draw through player and still jump like in this game?)

Alright,
I can make a drawing tutorial...
Not now,
I guess next week.

Thanks for playing xD

I was gonna say, This game got me going and I made my own paint engine for platformers. I wanted to say that could I use just 2 ideas from this game? I want to the bosses's attack and how it follows you, But I will make it a short attack. Oh and the paint fading which is simple with image alpha. Is it ok?

Alright,
be shure to but somewhere very small: inspired by Kyon E

xD

Lol, K.

Yeah, original.

Very predictable.

From the screenshots it looks like the Kirby Canvas Curse mechanics.

LOL

I didnt know about that game.
It looks almost the same

Thanks for playing

Gameplay: 7/10
Could have done sooo much more with it.
All the boss battles were the same, could have done something with deflecting bullets at them.
Your paint should have fuel so you can't draw too much.
Also the signs were stupid

Graphics: 5/10
Very basic, should make your characters roll instead of staying upright.

Total: 6/10
Just the average of the two other scores.

Could do sooooooooo much more

I guess I make a part 2 soon.
But than as a WIP
I want this to be a bit nicer game than what it is now xD

Uh. Cool supprise. The begginging... Short. But made in a day. good!

Thanks Kilmar

fun trial game

Now get back to work on dirkels! *whip!*

lol i love this game

Gameplay 8/10


A bit repetitive but fun to play. Really good work.

Graphics 7/10

Cuuld be better.

Overall 7.5/10

Nice game, I liked it and would like to see a number 2, even though you could make it a bit better.

Lol guys,
I made this game in one day xD
If you like this already,
I bet you like Dirkels, that will be released on 15 may (as v2.0)

Also, I think I make a part 2 of this game.

Gameplay 2/10

Very repetitive and boring. There are no real puzzles, the signs were uninteresting and there aren't even any secrets. The boss is boring and all it is is avoiding an object for 30 seconds. The game isn't fun and I'm sure you could have added REAL PUZZLES AND CHALLENGES. All the levels were just "draw a line to the goal." Not fun at all, and it'a an overrated concept. Also, if the player rolled and you had no control over his movement besides his rolling down lines, and maybe poking him to push him forward a little, then it would be vastly improved.

Graphics 3/10

The lines weren't connected, and the shading was the only good thing. The backgrounds were gradients and did not look realistic at all, the blocks were all the same, there were no animations, and everything is just poorly thought out. The characters are just circles, which is unacceptable. Circles never look good in games, and it's just a lazy excuse for bad character design.

Overall 2.5/10

Sorry, but I'm sure you can do better. I'm tired of people saying "this game rocks" just because it has a slightly unique concept. You could have done so much with it.
The idea of a "one day game" is pointless unless it's a contest, because the only thing that's changed is that the game comes out faster, but is generally poorly designed and not fun. I'd rather have a game take years but be very nice than a random one day game that is no fun at all.



Then do better.


First make the lines connected without lag, then you can bother with making a tutorial. This kind of thing is really easy to do.

Well...
Alright, that is your oppinion than
Ofcourse, I made it in one day.
So the drawing lines were just objects that he spawn...
and fade out again.
Also, it doesnt lagg...

You are right,
there isnt a challenge or anything fun about it,
it is just cool because it is new.
This is why I made this topic to see what people think about it and what I can improve.

Thanks for playing and gif me some ideas


Kyon E.

I though you were talking about the drawing platforms. But okay then.

uhm,
alright...

I love these drawing games! They so cool! plus it was short and the filesize was small!

Thanks dude!