I understand that the software is difficult, but passing the blame for your lack of skill (rather, skill that has yet to be harnessed) onto the software and the genre is the wrong way to go.
ElectroMan wasn't saying your song was bad. He was saying you've got a lot to learn. I'm saying the same thing. Pretty decent first attempt, but your second will be better if you take a bit of advise and do a little bit of research and mess around with things to find your own style. Research in this case is as easy as listening to some good music.