Edit: This is the revised Summary/Back Cover thing~
Your father is killed in front of you by a mysterious figure who
steals his research notes and flees. In his dying breath he whispers
to you, “Find the Vohmhin...”, launching you into an epic quest to
locate your father’s killer and avenge his death. Along the way you're
attacked by a mysterious cult and uncover a plot that threatens the
very fabric of reality. Now it is up to you to save the universe from
an ancient and sleeping evil the likes of which has not been seen
since the beginning of time. Are you willing to undergo the trials set
out before you to save the world, or will you simply surrender to the
madness wrought by this unspeakable horror?
This is what out storywriter came up with... I like the idea but I want to know ways to improve the "thought" and also if someone has any ideas on what type of jobs the character can do to earn money, I have farming as one of them... Also any other details that I should add!
Next Discussion: I would like your opinion - Do you like idea A or idea B better?
A) You get a magic sword at the beginning of the story and this sword, unknown to the character at first, is the only thing that can destroy the final boss. So you go around the map discovering lost powers of the sword and reclaim them... i.e. you will find the power of "Fire" and be able to do a devestating Fire Attack. This sword also changes it's shape to match the users preference. It can change into a sword, dagger, battle hammer, axe, etc. This will eliminate the need for a weapon shop.
B) You get a glove with seven small slots/pouches on it, with another slot/pouch over your palm. These slots will hold an ancient alien rock imbued with Natural Essences (fire, water, ice, earth, wind, light, and darkness). These rocks will be called "Tamraks" and your job is to collect all 7! The more you use i.e. "Fire" the higher it will level up and stronger attacks will be available. After collecting all 7, you will be known as the "Weilder" and with the powers combined, you can open an ancient door left by an alien race that created the final boss and seperated the stones (Tamraks). To use a power you remove one of the Tamraks from the selected slot and place it in the palm slot.
Edited by sasuke12, 28 March 2012 - 11:23 PM.