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[azcodon]

i released close beta game in english version.
If you have visited my game ,please delete cookie before you play because i updated the english version
***********A gift to 100st players*************

1/ seven star sword
2/ocean shield
3/100 credit
4/2000 solider
5/1000 gold
and many gift code
each 8 hour ,system automaticcally add item to you
My game

Basic to play my game
1/register a nickname and pass word
2/type your nick name and pass word then click log in
3/on main surface : find the text 'click here to train',you click to icon 'train' (this is train level)
4/chat: enter to begin chat----type message-----enter to send chat
5/main house : you will see many option of charater(skill,abiliti)
5/swarehouse : store your item(item get when you trainning on icon train)
6/market : you can buy,sell and transfer item here
7/train house : you can draft the solider here
8/Army : after you get enough the solider,you can set qualiti and type art to attack castle
9/click to map to attack any castle

My game
Bring any your trouble in the game to me
MR zin

Edited by azcodon, 17 March 2012 - 03:47 AM.

[Artaex Media]

You may only put English games here.
So you'll have to translate your 'game'.

Also, you should put a direct link to the game, not your website (which is also in Vietnamese?)

Oh, and you already posted a topic like this one so there's no need for duplicate topics.

[azcodon]

You may only put English games here.
So you'll have to translate your 'game'.

Also, you should put a direct link to the game, not your website (which is also in Vietnamese?)

Oh, and you already posted a topic like this one so there's no need for duplicate topics.

ok,i fixed my link
please test it for me,i will translate it to english as son ,i can not release in my country

[azcodon]

my game is mutiplayer game online.Noone test?

[Artaex Media]

my game is mutiplayer game online.Noone test?

Not if you don't translate.

[Nocturne]

Unfortunately it's difficult to get people to test your game when the site you are advertising it on is mainly english speaking (or at least, that's the language we use for communicating). I suggest either translating it, or looking for a site or forum in your native language...

[azcodon]

i released game in english version.Althought i have finish it but will get much trouble in front of ,so i need assist from GMC.thanks
If you have visited my game ,please delete cookie before you play because i updated the english version

My game
Basic to play my game
1/register a nickname and pass word
2/type your nick name and pass word then click log in
3/on main surface : find the text 'click here to train',you click to icon 'train' (this is train level)
4/chat: enter to begin chat----type message-----enter to send chat
5/main house : you will see many option of charater(skill,abiliti)
5/swarehouse : store your item(item get when you trainning on icon train)
6/market : you can buy,sell and transfer item here
7/train house : you can draft the solider here
8/Army : after you get enough the solider,you can set qualiti and type art to attack castle
9/click to map to attack any castle

Bring any your trouble in the game to me
MR zin

Edited by azcodon, 01 March 2012 - 05:44 AM.

[azcodon]

Hey man!!
everyone dont worry,i reicieved a idea that you trouble n your address.i fact it is not nessesary,you can type anykey or null,or none....
my game is only require : nickname,password and email to registance flood,so real name,phone address can anykey
please test my game,it mutplayer game
after stable version ,i will support you any code i can

[azcodon]

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[azcodon]

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[Debels]

This is the worst Browser Game i Ever Played In My Life!
The graphics look like you just ripped some graphics from different games and pasted them there with out any design!
Really why would you release something like this?
I would recommend you to add like monster's and better design to make it 100% better because right now i played 5 min and i got really bored.
It got really laggy.
You should add a option to select Lenguage to prevent those messages in that other language that are kinda confusing.

[azcodon]

This is the worst Browser Game i Ever Played In My Life!
The graphics look like you just ripped some graphics from different games and pasted them there with out any design!
Really why would you release something like this?
I would recommend you to add like monster's and better design to make it 100% better because right now i played 5 min and i got really bored.
It got really laggy.
You should add a option to select Lenguage to prevent those messages in that other language that are kinda confusing.

resoure i download from yoyogame(i will design it in next time)
game is asynchronize,why lags?you can check your internet
have you gone to the mine yet? it earn gold
and have you gone to the battle yet? try up lev 2st or 3st you go to battle ,here you play like chess(arrow damage pike,pike damage horse,horse damage sword ....ect.)
let patient

[Debels]

This is the worst Browser Game i Ever Played In My Life!
The graphics look like you just ripped some graphics from different games and pasted them there with out any design!
Really why would you release something like this?
I would recommend you to add like monster's and better design to make it 100% better because right now i played 5 min and i got really bored.
It got really laggy.
You should add a option to select Lenguage to prevent those messages in that other language that are kinda confusing.

resoure i download from yoyogame(i will design it in next time)
game is asynchronize,why lags?you can check your internet
have you gone to the mine yet? it earn gold
and have you gone to the battle yet? try up lev 2st or 3st you go to battle ,here you play like chess(arrow damage pike,pike damage horse,horse damage sword ....ect.)
let patient

My internet isn't the problem, i have a 1 or 2 MB internet Connection
I didn't go anywhere since i didn't understand that strange language you used, since the English traduction isn't here yet

edit: I'm in the mine and i don't win gold

Edited by Debels, 17 March 2012 - 04:53 AM.

[azcodon]

This is the worst Browser Game i Ever Played In My Life!
The graphics look like you just ripped some graphics from different games and pasted them there with out any design!
Really why would you release something like this?
I would recommend you to add like monster's and better design to make it 100% better because right now i played 5 min and i got really bored.
It got really laggy.
You should add a option to select Lenguage to prevent those messages in that other language that are kinda confusing.

resoure i download from yoyogame(i will design it in next time)
game is asynchronize,why lags?you can check your internet
have you gone to the mine yet? it earn gold
and have you gone to the battle yet? try up lev 2st or 3st you go to battle ,here you play like chess(arrow damage pike,pike damage horse,horse damage sword ....ect.)
let patient

My internet isn't the problem, i have a 1 or 2 MB internet Connection
I didn't go anywhere since i didn't understand that strange language you used, since the English traduction isn't here yet

edit: I'm in the mine and i don't win gold

you must wait for 5 minute,gold ,iron ,stone mines will output
next time i make npc to mine,you will fight to npc:)

[Debels]

This is the worst Browser Game i Ever Played In My Life!
The graphics look like you just ripped some graphics from different games and pasted them there with out any design!
Really why would you release something like this?
I would recommend you to add like monster's and better design to make it 100% better because right now i played 5 min and i got really bored.
It got really laggy.
You should add a option to select Lenguage to prevent those messages in that other language that are kinda confusing.

resoure i download from yoyogame(i will design it in next time)
game is asynchronize,why lags?you can check your internet
have you gone to the mine yet? it earn gold
and have you gone to the battle yet? try up lev 2st or 3st you go to battle ,here you play like chess(arrow damage pike,pike damage horse,horse damage sword ....ect.)
let patient

My internet isn't the problem, i have a 1 or 2 MB internet Connection
I didn't go anywhere since i didn't understand that strange language you used, since the English traduction isn't here yet

edit: I'm in the mine and i don't win gold

you must wait for 5 minute,gold ,iron ,stone mines will output
next time i make npc to mine,you will fight to npc:)

ok

[Derme]

A few things that I noticed...

• Black text on black background?
• Font style is almost unreadable
• Don't use the "get_string()" function
• Don't ask for people's address or mobile numbers, it puts them off playing
• Fix order, chat text appears over pop-ups
• You might want to add a "Getting Started" pop-up, as I had no idea what I needed to do first
• Change the whole UI, it's messy, cluttered, hard to understand, inconsistent, ect.
• Finish translation, some words and sentences are unclear
• Graphics, I have to agree it looks like they have just been cut and pasted there
• This game isn't even close to beta.

Game was responsive when I actually worked out what to click, if you fix all the above it might be worth looking at again.

[azcodon]

A few things that I noticed...

• Black text on black background?
• Font style is almost unreadable
• Don't use the "get_string()" function
• Don't ask for people's address or mobile numbers, it puts them off playing
• Fix order, chat text appears over pop-ups
• You might want to add a "Getting Started" pop-up, as I had no idea what I needed to do first
• Change the whole UI, it's messy, cluttered, hard to understand, inconsistent, ect.
• Finish translation, some words and sentences are unclear
• Graphics, I have to agree it looks like they have just been cut and pasted there
• This game isn't even close to beta.

Game was responsive when I actually worked out what to click, if you fix all the above it might be worth looking at again.

thank for your answer,i m sicking few day.
i get some trouble by gm4html5,get _string instead of text box(will change if i have free time)
address and phone is unnessesary,it can be '',null or anykey(it use to make new password if player lost )
i translate by google ) so it bad <<<it really trouble
nexttime i will design graphic

[Keano]

Wow its good but, if you was a nice game designer you would make a translator on the top to pick a
language like

English | Vietnamese

But of all that nice job