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#1 imam_mashur

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Posted 29 August 2010 - 06:40 AM

I made this game for Competition06.
This is not great game but maybe you can play it.
SCREEN SHOT :
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You can play it or download it at this link.
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THANKS... PLEASE feed back...
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#2 JAk HAk

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Posted 29 August 2010 - 07:19 AM

-_- I died five times on the tutorial. Then, I had to start all over and skip through the text again. The collision system seemed buggy, or just not very good. Sorry.
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#3 imam_mashur

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Posted 31 August 2010 - 04:01 AM

Ohh noo... Guys.. This is an easy game.
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#4 Shadowrend

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Posted 31 August 2010 - 01:54 PM

Easy, boring, bad graphics, bad gameplay, no restart when you die, grammar, no save/load...

This doesn't feel finished.

Sorry, but you know what they say... It's not important to win, it is to compete.
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#5 deano-5

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Posted 31 August 2010 - 05:04 PM

I kinda liked the graphics, though the grammar does need sorting.

I did not like the 'flame' boxes, flames on their own would be better.
Also I kept being shot by people off-screen,
which suggests to me that you need to work on the view.

You need to make it interesting and exciting to play.

Don't be disheartened, its not a bad start. :D
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#6 Mailas

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Posted 31 August 2010 - 10:06 PM

Not a big fan of the graphics but it was a really nice attempt.
Keep it up!
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#7 imam_mashur

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Posted 03 September 2010 - 06:40 AM

@ALL
Thanks for playing
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#8 commander of games

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Posted 03 September 2010 - 02:33 PM

I'm sorry, but this game has no hope at all against the other Competition06 entries.

The graphics were not to bad, but they could use some better shading.

The dialouge... Lets just say, unless you fix the grammar, this game could never be ported to the PSP and sold.

The gameplay wasnt innovative at all. It was just your average Platform Shooter. There was nothing special about it. I also really suggest you add a save system for the levels, I died about 4 times on the tutorial and got so frustrated I just closed the game down and deleted it from my computer.

Graphics: 4/10 They need more shading.
Music: 5/10 It got repetitive very quickly, and seemed like you ripped it from an old video game.
Sound: 2/10 All I heard was the 'typing' sounds and the shooting sounds. So not very good.
Gameplay: 3/10 Nothing innovative, just your average platform shooter.
Story: 4/10 I really dont have much of an opinion on this, as I couldnt read the dialouge properly.

Overall: 4/10 Needs alot of work. It has absolutely no hope of even being considered in its current state.
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#9 imam_mashur

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Posted 16 November 2010 - 07:30 AM

thanks for all... :rolleyes:
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#10 BattleRifle BR55

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Posted 18 November 2010 - 05:02 PM

Fix the view so that the majority of what is seen isn't what's already been traversed. Also, jumping seems off as jumping from the edge usually doesn't work, and I fall into a pit.
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